Horror Dream Comments
The darkest hour of my life
Was the spring’s hottest night
When I watched a dream in excite
That dream in my memory is still bright
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A nightmare dissolved by motherly touch so heavens saved you...and that horrible vision made you write a very descriptive verse.
Great picturisation of dream...a sweet and lovely poem: -) do read my poems and comment if you find them worth.
Use your dreams to make your poetry and a infinite path with words will open to you We are drops of dreams night
Fatima, Your description of a horror dream is frightning; but pleasantly, your dream ended by your mom's hand.Nice poem for a 16 year old.
I found this cute. You began really well, the rhythm was nice, but just to keep up with the rhyme, you gave up on the good start. Try to rewrite these two lines especially, I to myself ran to find any place I felt like it was saying me something to write And it is got ready to bite.
Wow nice rhymin nightmare poem. Enjoyd readin. Tnx 4 yor coment.
just a dream of night and the way of telling the story is every nice
just a dream of night and the way of telling the story is every nice
very nicely expressed fatima............ well done........
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7/30/2025 7:33:20 AM # 1.0.0
Nice use of simillis... enjoyed it