Saturday, July 6, 2013

Hormones Comments

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There is a hormone that can make you happy,
and a next one that can turn you sad.
These potions running open in my veins,
framing my destiny to be good or bad.
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Bijay Poudel
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Kanav Justa 07 January 2014

, , hahah last four lines make me laugh, , , you have got huge talent, , , last poem i read of yours was the one where you were inspired from the uncertainity principal, , and this one is about harmones, , , its good to see the taste of tehchnicality in your poems, , sure you were a bright student in your college, , : P

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Gajanan Mishra 06 July 2013

good poem, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Bijay Poudel

Bijay Poudel

Khotang, Nepal
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