You and I started
On a treasure - hunt
Very soon I discovered
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frank and creative in its expression the poem reads good...thanks...10
shakuntala ji doing yr first poem and its so beautiful dreamy and charming... awalk through a solitary dewy morn... in the old school style like me very nice loved reading it cheers and ten
a poem with many faces....horizons would not divide us
The title of the poem attracted me! What you say is true! Even the setting and the rising sun! We keep rotating with our mother earth and the sun never truly sets! And as long as we live, it is that illusion of immortality which perhaps keeps us going! Thanks for sharing! -Raj
Indeed it is luck that we unite and depart and the horizon we see is an illusion!
loved this too...a downright realist you are...not afraid to call a spade a spade...