Sunday, December 30, 2018

Horizons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Joy was an elusive drug
As a child, I soared so high
I could never touch the stars again,
No matter what I tried
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Bill Cantrell
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Richard Wlodarski 13 April 2020

Bill, you have captured in such succinct form the tragic loss of a good friend. Such a heart-wrenching poem full of love and pathos. On some level, your friend has received it. And thanks you for it!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2019

No matter what you have tried for but you have felt that horizon has carried joy for you. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.

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Kostas Lagos 31 December 2018

Sadness, melancholy, hope.All together greatly woven

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Sandra Feldman 30 December 2018

Very nice, sad poem full of love, pity and understanding. So beautifully done. Lots of feeling. Very moving.

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