Joy was an elusive drug
As a child, I soared so high
I could never touch the stars again,
No matter what I tried
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No matter what you have tried for but you have felt that horizon has carried joy for you. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.
Very nice, sad poem full of love, pity and understanding. So beautifully done. Lots of feeling. Very moving.
Bill, you have captured in such succinct form the tragic loss of a good friend. Such a heart-wrenching poem full of love and pathos. On some level, your friend has received it. And thanks you for it!