Horizons Comments

Philosophically written poem. Very touching too. Great Thanks for sharing with me

very nicely written poem i liked it 10+++

each line is written, having been well thought of.10 shan

i loved the 'debris of disorder prime' part.....good diction...beautiful poem........congrajs, , ,

A worthy dedication to all our teachers.....Winnie

Hi Bhaswat: I loved the poem, the rhytheme and the structure, plus a tribute to all the dedicated primary school teachers. What more could one ask. A ten 10 Your friend Lynn

excellent work & the dedication too. 10++

lovely poem, with philosophical touch. the fact that you have dedicated it to teachers of primary school makes it even more relevant.10 Mamta

we can kiss the words in good write Was that the horizon where prayers rose Came to the fore the innocent love The heavens, the gods and Adams and Eves Bound in oneness with nothing above

Rhythmic & lovely poem. A great tribute to the teachers who taught the poet.

Horizons well defined. By dedicating to primary school teachers, it has become more meaningful and vast like real horizons. A beautiful poem that serves for knowledge and a great cause........10/10. Regards Naseer

a perfect tribute to those primary teachers the founders of our childrens education -10 anjali

The horizon is a place neither here nor there a line one cannot go over. day on one side night on the other. Mortaliy on one side and immortality on the other. Good things to think off here.

Very rhythmic. Nicely penned. A poem for a cause. Deserves 10+

i've liked this poem. it's very beautiful and nice work. well done +10

A very profound and meaningful write that flows so beautifully, well penned 10 Lynda xx

I particularly liked the rhythm and rhyme of this beautiful poem and found it deep and meaningful.. 10 love Karin

Beautiful poem a good insightful thoughts...good piece....10

I really enjoyed reading this. thank you for sharing this piece of artwork,

as the horizon cried for joy the bosom heart rejoice the emptiness of the soul...leave nothing but a horizon in your sight.....it's the light house of the soul to heaven..... i like the way you say....the concept create my heart the vision to live beyond what is the immortality of the soul.....thank for sharing... God bless. a 10 +++