Horizon Lost Comments

..now i am blind even though i can see...and a vagabond where i shud not be... ..as lost is the horizon in the dark.... ...wonderful words...loved this poem brother... ..am sure one day u will walk ur way home..

Great poem, great vision. Loved the fact that after everything, home is always best place to be.10/10

Light and laughter began to fade My world is now captured in shade

good story telling...good rhymes...the beats get choppy in parts but over all well put...

Wow! What a great storyteller you project, it seems all is complete of what will be the next life if things go wrong... You have captured the real meaning of days to come... I felt proud of what you wrote....Great Poem in this century...God bless...rated 10 +++

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill. The poem is highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. If the page is not shown, please type the name of the poem in the search box and search the poem. Warmest regards Akmal