Horizon Comments

Hi Agatha, A poem of profound gravity, seriously contemplating the fate of mother earth on the one side, but reminding us how insignificant our stature is within the universe: the place where We're called some names we never heard before. And the universe whispers that our journey is now at an end...! ! ! ! Yes! Your poem, but, does not end in a prophesy of 'end of the world. There is a positive note in the end- light at the end of the tunnel. Like an apocalypse! Good write. Really enjoyed reading. Congrats.10+++

This happens to be one of the most beautiful poems that I read in recent days!

Steps remain loyal linking with spirit is amazing in this expressive poem shared. Nicely drafted.10

The universe whispers! ! And, nature teaches us. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.