Looking far into the distance,
Earth seemingly meets the sky
And forms a line we call horizon.
Earth and sky so very different in character
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A magnificent write my dear poet friend. You expressed the horizon very well. Your use of language here is most impressionable. Comparison of life and death. Well done.
Death an illusion much like horizon, Soul lives on beyond our vision Love this concept... and firmly believe in it! It gives hope and meaning to human existence! Through logic and sound reasoning, you have driven home the immortality of the soul...! This deserves full marks!
The horizon has long been symbolical of hope, as if there is something beyond it. An inspired poem Om, thought-provoking.
The anology is with presumable conviction and the notion of horizon hiding what is beyond is profusive of thoughts philosophical. A poem that can withstand the test of time, sir.