Monday, November 10, 2008

Hoping To Come Back Soon Comments

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I tried to pick up nice things for you,
Fruit, sweets and everything I thought would make you happy,
Some things that would shift your mind from the fact that I’m leaving you now,
I unpacked your bags and everything that belonged to you,
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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

Beautiful poem; so profound; sensitive and very well expressed sentiments. Though the background of this context is not known, the poem speaks in general the sepration between mother and offspring..has great feel.

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Kefentse Sathekge 13 November 2008

Zoe, wow! It has been a while since i last read a profound poem. this is beautiful. i hope your son appreciates the love i felt in this poem.

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