Thursday, November 3, 2011

Hoping, One Day Comments

Rating: 4.1

</>I sit here alone
all by myself
hoping one day you'll realize
how badly I need you
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Sara Panicali
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Dwayne Banks 12 April 2012

from the heart...again, writing is our way of expression...I say Good!

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Abdallah Gamal 07 November 2011

Outstanding! Lovely poem expresses the loyalty to the beloved, perfect :)

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Adeline Foster 06 November 2011

Ah. It is time to let go; of course only if you need the auro of despair to write like this. Try a lifting one before you spoil it all. Read mine - Despair - Adeline

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Cosmic Dreamer 03 November 2011

Hope is man's only dream... Nice Poem...

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