Monday, January 16, 2012

Hoping Of Happy New Year Comments

Rating: 2.6

The year has passed
The New Year has arrived
All the pains sadness and angriness has become past
All the happiness, sweetness and love has arrived
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Khalida Bano Ali 20 September 2015

A nice happy new year poem................................

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Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

Your message comes across, even if not grammatically perfect...the best way to grow is to continue spilling your soul through your poetry. PEACE..and understanding...I understood the emotions you wrote about just fine!

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Aman Arora 07 September 2013

Grammatically weak, but keep writing. I am sure two years later, when you read this poem, you would be able to make out those errors and then this poem would read more beautiful.

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