The year has passed
The New Year has arrived
All the pains sadness and angriness has become past
All the happiness, sweetness and love has arrived
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Your message comes across, even if not grammatically perfect...the best way to grow is to continue spilling your soul through your poetry. PEACE..and understanding...I understood the emotions you wrote about just fine!
Grammatically weak, but keep writing. I am sure two years later, when you read this poem, you would be able to make out those errors and then this poem would read more beautiful.
A nice happy new year poem................................