Saturday, June 9, 2018

Hoping I Shall Be Proved Wrong By Someone Comments

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When I suffer from a disease
and I am in pain
I don't blame anyone else,
I blame myself and my sins.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kostas Lagos 09 June 2018

Difficult subject with a suitable approach.Superb poem

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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2018

I am more a 'realist' but tend toward optimism. The good intentions of prayer, without actions, pave the road to metaphorical. Suffering is often a matter of chaos, but it is also often a matter of greed and inaction.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2018

Life sometimes presents situations we cannot fully grasp. Life is full of intricacies. A powerful write thought provoking.10

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Aarzoo Mehek 09 June 2018

Sometimes life seems unfair and sometimes it's just beyond our thoughts and questions. Very sensitive poem Babajaan.

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Nudershada Cabanes 09 June 2018

Thought provoking piece Sir Akhtar.10

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