Hoping For The Beat. Comments

You create a poem here of a dire situation, of drastic action. The red of blood and the horror that some people face is expressed here and felt by the reader that has not lived through such trouble. I am almost dodging the bullets that come out of your writing. Well done.10/10

hopint for the beat very very nice with al these bullets stopping our hearts I hope still........ let the bullets stop and peace prevails all over but when? ........