Sunday, January 27, 2008

Hoping For Fireworks Comments

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Your smile lit up my room
no lightbulb shines brighter
Finally everything seemed clear,
not blurry and out of view
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Faith Wood
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Mary Gordley 28 January 2008

Very interesting poem Faith. These lines seem to tell the central part of your dilemma: 'Looking into your eyes, I saw bombs exploding instead of the fireworks I had hoped for' Good luck in sorting it all out. I hope when you do find the fireworks they are special. Thanks for the poem.

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Faith Wood

Faith Wood

Albany, Ny
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