Friday, January 1, 2016

Hopes For 2016 Comments

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Where politicians are failed,
humanity is derailed,
innocent children
and helpless women,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2016

no need to ry life goes on by and all politicians r like uncles u placed them so why now cry or defy let hem for a fresh term try and they know as well as u know why good poetic decry JA LAND OF THE AUSSIES IS DOWN UNDER MST READ PLEASE

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Valsa George 02 January 2016

An in depth evaluation of the year gone by! It has been one of mixed fortunes... more of violence and hatred, mass killing and intolerance! Let us hope that the incoming year will be one of better prospects, though so many threats are before us like a war, global warming, a stellar collision and many more. What ever the year has in store for us, let us all combat them staying united in love! A great message for New Year! Wish you once again a happy New Year Akhtar ji!

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Ayman Parray 01 January 2016

I saw today on the TV that the North Polar, ice caps are melting and temp there has increased by 20 degrees, which is very alarming and terrifying. And the picture you posted say's it all and it was not coincidental either as I know this from your poem. The best thing about this poem is that it starts on a heartbreaking note and ends with hope and you keep hope alive... As long as hope is alive we will never die. Thank you Akhtar Sahib for this insightful piece.

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Kelly Kurt 01 January 2016

Two arts; create and destroy. And half or more of creation is the ability to destroy. May this year bring about change. Happy New Year to you and yours, my friend.

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2016

Really a nice poem on current affairs....Lets hope everything reverse this year and people unity and live peacefully...10 HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U AND YOUR FAMILY....2016

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2016

An outstanding write about the hatred of the extremists who cause so much suffering to innocent people. We have to stand united against the madness of their beliefs! To care for each other and do good in the world we can connect with people by writing about truth, justice and peace. As you write in your poem we must be optimistic and hopeful for a new dawn! Happy New Year Akhtar and best wishes!

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 January 2016

The pain the suffering at the hands of extremist is unbearable and unspeakable.... Heart wrenching poem ended in a positive way.. We need positive people around who can give direction to our distorted thoughts. I wish this coming year bring more joys, happiness and bonding among all. Happy New year Akhtar jii. God bless you and your family.10 for this lovely poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 January 2016

Promotion of love is cultured with hope and courage in this New Year. A very happy new year to you and your family. Grace and peace are shining on the way. Fantastic sharing done definitely.10

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