Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Hopes, Content, Peace And Frustration Comments

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Life on earth lives on hopes
Hopes of life glow with peace
Elusive peace punctures the hopes
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Somanathan Iyer
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 29 August 2013

A fine poem. What Mr.Ratan Tata told of the foreigners outlook on India is a mirror to us for a change.The last stanza is the remedy to check Maoism and terrorism not bullets or jails

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Neela Nath Das 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem.loved very much.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem with strong message. Its very well said, hurdles changes our entire life, it can leave one shattered. Though it may look very small, but can kill one.. The poem is beautifully concluded with the great message..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 August 2013

Peace comes with content Content comes with fulfillment Beautiful message delivered. With shortened lines, you sweetened your poem. Delivery of your message is forceful, strong, and direct. Keep it up. Thank you.

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