Sunday, May 17, 2020

Hopes And Dreams Comments

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Each day breaks in
with a wallet full of hopes
Like the Santa Clause
With wrapped up gifts.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Anjandev Roy 21 March 2024

This is an excellent piece..... enjoyed thoroughly..... thanks for sharing....

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Valsa George 18 May 2020

Life is full of hope and hopelessness! Flowers of hope bloom and wither! In between if we can enjoy their beauty and scent, life becomes meaningful......! 'At the end of the day Making the empty wallet a pillow'....... Love these lines!

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Thank you dear poetess. At the time of need people who are obliged to love us pretend to be so giving promises and expectations. But at the time of actual need they turn their back

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 May 2020

Wish your dreams come true. A perfectly real poem about this life. 'With white little flowers Infused with celestial scent And instilled sweet nectar Alas! The flowers wither away Before I could access.'...is so beautifully done. Thanks for posting.10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 May 2020

hope shows the budget canvas for next breath dream colorfully leads the lazy mind if realistic veins like to sleep but if the breath of hard working veins unable to implement the budget canvas then life notifies immature death!

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Thank you dear Mahtab. When our hopes are foreseen unfulfilled the immature death of dreams is notified

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