Hopes are given and taken away
Still you have to smile all the way
But never again let anyone play
Because you need to be happy everyday
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Hopes are given and taken away, excellent write, thanks for sharing,10
Hopes are given and taken away Still you have to smile all the way.....Loved the expression Rini!
A very inspiring and positive write. Great rhyme. Very well executed.10
You could have made the last two lines something like: Life's too short to sit and wait It all can change in a single day Or something like that and it would have rhymed better. Just a suggestion. Liked it.
Hope is the rain that falls on a dry gulch.