Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Hopeless Hope Comments

Rating: 2.5

A wave
That breaks softly and
Hurts stormily and
Vanishes horizontally
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

This is why I have stopped hoping and just exist in the moment. Excellent poem, Udaya

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 26 August 2015

excellent comparison drawn...when hope shatters it's no less than a wave and tempest..nicely written.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

Sri Lanka
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