Hopeless Admiration. Comments
Amongst the smoke,
The laughs and the jokes,
I stare at you.
Amongst the secrets and the lies,
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Oh...and by the way...I thought your poem was beautiful. Perhaps the one you admire so much isn't as blind as you think...perhaps not hopeless...
Just curious...does the smoke refer to smoke and mirrors? Or the smoke of a smokey pub?
What struck me as I read your poem don't ever ask, was the hope seeming to merge from the hopelessness. Hoping I saw right! 10 from hopelessly still hopeful, Tai
Maybe not hopeless after this lovely write of admiration and tender romance. Patricia Gale
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7/27/2025 7:20:38 PM # 1.0.0
best poem yet. very very nice. wish it was about me.