Friday, March 23, 2012

Hopeless Comments

Rating: 4.0

Strength is built upon fear, What is there to fear when you have no strength, You can't carry on if your weak. Some were chose to win, to lose its fate or is it destiny? You choose where to begin.
Time goes and you start to grow, Bad choices are made and you need to go.
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Alicia Phillips 16 February 2016

Everything I read was unique you gave a way with words I love this poem keep it up no word can express what I want to say

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Makayla Straight 13 December 2012

Why let you be rewarded when punishment can be affordable I love the way you put it. It is so true! ! Thanks for another amazing poem! !

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The Devils Girl 28 March 2012

I love this poem it shows everything uve told me all wrapped into one poem i love it it made me want to cry because i take things for graunted every day. Love this poem

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Jessie Jett 23 March 2012

You have a unique style of writing. I like how you portray such an image, almost like a story of a lesson.

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