Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Hopeless Comments

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I’m all alone in a room that’s dark,
Fighting the urge to add another mark
My tears are flowing, my thoughts collide,
And the end result I’ll have to hide
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Hayley Foster
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Gold Fish 21 October 2009

You sound like you are in a real state of despair. My heart goes out to you for times as these are filled with pain and drenched with tears. I encourage you to take the time to read some of my poems, so you can see that the dark times are mixed with some brighter more hopeful times. Start with 'Tides of Change' and the rest you will be able to identify by their titles.

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Hayley Foster

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