Saturday, June 7, 2008

Hopeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life's Line
One stream
No choices
Even if you scream
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Sarah Ibrahim
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 October 2008

Do we have to say goodbye when all we have got is each other heart? ? ? ? The flow of this piece is like your rhythm of 'inviting soul'.

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Yasser Koor 05 October 2008

that is true. we have no choices and nothing to do when we have no hope. nice poem well-done

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Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2008

a poem sad in tone...good well meaning streaming lines...well done sarah! *10*

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 June 2008

profound, considering the eternity life is not that dark

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