Monday, September 3, 2007

Hopeful Comments

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So this is my first free write of my Creative Writing class. And I know it's crazy verse that doesn't make sense; it was originally just straight prose that I cut up. But the feeling was like furiously writing down a poem and having it make perfect sense. I like it, so here it is:


Hopeful for everything I've ever wanted.
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Delilah Miller
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x... x... 03 September 2007

You already shine, your writing excels. Perhaps it's because of all the 'hope' in you. School started already? ? The 5th for public in this town, gives those at summer homes time to get home after Labor Day. If so have a great year AND, keep up with your words for you have a special talent. imho..~~~marci.xox ~~

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