Saturday, May 12, 2018

Hope You Shall Wait For Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You please wait,
I am just coming
let me collect a few sun rays
let me steal smiles from the lips of an innocent child,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Nadia Umber Lodhi 24 August 2018

Thanks sir, written well, beautiful translations

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Nadia umber Lodhi 24 August 2018

Thanks sir for translation you written well

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A lovely poem that conveys a promise and hope.. Beautifully crafted. Very heartwarming.10

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Muzahidul Reza 14 May 2018

A great penned matching one here hope and dream are turning to love, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 24 August 2018

Thanks for appreciating my poem and translation of Akhtar sb

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Kelly Kurt 12 May 2018

The writer wanted to enjoy the now, in which she existed. Please enjoy every now, Akhtar.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 May 2018

Women have no option but to wait for her some one be it night or day may be he is with another one having fun no woman in love with her hubby can say I can't wait do come even if you are late but come my dearest one just come..if you change the spelling it wiil become a pun never mind sir poet of the whole wide world you alone must come

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