Hope To Be Happy Comments

very powerful message.Hope is life.

There is a great message in this poem Jim. I like the way you have spaced it out, as it works really well, also the rhyme adds to its effect. 'I'll be happy that's the lure, I will be dam happy that's the cure.' 10/10 Karin Anderson

Wow. Now this is a good poem! I can completely relate to this. Hope is such a wonderful thing. You've probably read it, but if you haven't I'm sure you'd enjoy Emily Dickens' ' Hope is the thing with feathers'

simply fantastic! lovely!

hope has been pictured in hopeful language. shan

Hi jim i like this gets to the point hope or not well might be or not. yes i like it nice peice of work

Got to have faith and hope to make it: O)

Interesting style, Jim. Let's see some more.

Well, the best way is not to hope for anything and take your life the way it is... 'be what may'... great write :)