Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
Saturday, December 6, 2014

Hope Shines At Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

While morning comes with light,
It goes to sleep very deep night.
While dream goes away so far,
In far space giggles hiding a star.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2015

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night.nice lines...10 Where light is there Darkness has nothing to show here Path becomes aluminous Person walks continues Where light is there Darkness has nothing to show here Path becomes aluminous Person walks continues

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Daniel Brick 04 January 2015

There's a play by Eugene O'Neill called A LONG DAY'S JOURNEY INTO NIGHT. I love that title but the play is tragic and unrelenting; when night finally arrives, the characters are emotionally drained and find no rest in sleep. Your poem is just the opposite. It has the circular structure of a day beginning with promises, an afternoon of purposeful action and fulfillment at night. The hope which shines in the morning blesses people throughout their day. Your poem puts your readers in that same mood of hope, effort, fufillment.

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Heather Wilkins 30 December 2014

Life becomes cheerful in grace of God a lovely write

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 December 2014

Nice inspiring poem penned with wonderful loving lines on the eve of Christmas..........10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 December 2014

Sun the hope on eath and words Sun smiles to produce new fragrance, We all proceed to success in patience. In sea lives safely breaks danger a cod, Life becomes cheerful in grace of God. very interesting thanks for share

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2014

Sun smiles and shines with hope, People wake up to help and cope... nice lines....10 sun brings not only hope but stops negative approach to excel in life as such

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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