Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Hope’s Words Comments

Rating: 4.5

It seemed a day very pleasant
So fine in weather, beautiful in shades
Nothing seemed wrong
Except for the pain in my heart
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Emily Angel
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Daniel Warner 25 November 2012

Good job.The way the poem is very straightforward and can better contain how the stanzas are set up.

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