Saturday, October 1, 2011

Hope On Nothing Comments

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I could draw the line
But shore and sea
Agreed on nothing
Man made promises
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Hans Vr 04 October 2011

This poem is very well written. Deceit is all around, Honesty has not died

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

(As the nature knows when the rain will fall) ... I like this line, , , , Man made promises are temporary to fulfil our hopes.... Wonderful poem....

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