Friday, October 28, 2011

Hope Of A Lonely Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

why are you not here
why didn't you take me with you
why didn't you say good bye
aren't you going to protect me
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Silentpoet Grl
mom
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Hope Anderson 13 January 2012

now this is my second time reading this poem of yours and it really made me cry i feel wat u are going threw........ and i really thank u for giving me advice on wat i should do to get out of this predicument

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Hope Anderson 21 December 2011

wow great poem: +) i understand it a little were your coming from, but its good

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Cosmic Dreamer 03 November 2011

A tramp, a rich man, a poet, a dreamer and a lonesome soul... They all need love and affection... Your poem has a beautiful agony that I find bewitching... Well done...

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Anthony Han 02 November 2011

I don't usually enjoy short poems but yours are fine, although I like this one a lot more. Keep it up.

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The 4am Poet Worm 31 October 2011

You sent a chill down my spine.. and made the hairs on my neck raise up... i didnt find my answers till i was 28yrs old... i hope you find someone who truly deserves you SG..X..

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Unwritten Soul 31 October 2011

Oh my friend, that was hurtful to listen this...a prove that you really expressed this very well..but i know, the hurt not equal as you have now...i can heal perfectly but i can say, be patient and if no one to look after you, you must remember to take care of yourself coz it's your life, people never make it perfect for you, but you can! as long as you love yourself, smile Silentpoet, heal the broken and let the pieces merge again :) wish you the best_Unwritten Soul

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Claudia Krizay 29 October 2011

Well written, and I can certainly identify with it. Filled with emotion, good job. CAK

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Dave Walker 28 October 2011

A really sad but beautiful poem. Great write.

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