Sunday, October 25, 2015

Hope Looks Bright Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun smoothed the first chilled air
With green hands made of leaves
To straighten tilted rays of morrow.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 October 2015

'You have won the honey blue sky'! Nice work.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 October 2015

like the rain washing away dust happiness washes away sorrow Thanks-10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 October 2015

Lovely dance with songs of sparrow. A true unification with nature.

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Tony Adah 25 October 2015

Beautiful imageries. I love this poem and thx for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 25 October 2015

Illumination isn't illusion any more Happiness has washed its little feet For dancing with songs of sparrow...................Spechlesss................Awesome (running out of words) 1000

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