Monday, January 12, 2009

Hope Kills Comments

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HOPE- kills
--love- is a waste
-dreams- cant be accomplished that's why they're dreams
--religion - fails
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Matt Hartwell 30 November 2009

This was the first poem i ever wrote

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Paris Of Troy 28 November 2009

I disagree completely. Hope saves. Dreams are the drive that keeps us going. And as for the rest, you hhave a point. But the overall theme is depressing. There is light at the end of the tunnel my friend. You have a gift. Don't throw it away on poems like this. It's wasteful. There is hope.

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Desiree Burdick 12 January 2009

powerful words good poem

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