Hope Is The Breath Of Life To Us Comments

read it to be loved Still fall even if You are the last dropp of rain in drought Still hug even if You are the last petal of flower buds

Still alive Even after you are already gone... Still madly in love Even after you buried your pasted But never your hope... Still you are going to hear Beautiful comments About your brilliant poem... Still thinking, You deserve a ten plus, plus, plus... Please dear shirin, Keep inspiring the World With your talented works.... Romeo from New York!

wonderful poem milady. :)

Still fall even if You are the last dropp of rain in drought Still hug even if You are the last petal of flower buds Still rise even if You are the last summit of mountains Still stand even if You are the last cypress in winters a lovely poem with rich meanings, sweet idea.. lovely written and the make up of poem is perfect.. hope you write more and more..because your poetry iis matchless and very heart touching one..really a good poem...

this poem really conveys hope.

Dear Shirin, this is a nice poem. last star of cosmos, last singer of love, the last seed in rocks, last dew on leaves in the morning, the last angel of solace, the last petal of flower buds, i liked all these lines.. thank u very much for sharing. go on writing.. u hve great talent.