Monday, January 29, 2018

Hope: Is More Than Four Letters Comments

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To carry your love upon shoulders of flesh

You carry the burden halved right where you stand
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Akhtar Jawad 15 July 2018

i am not confident I shall reach my destination, I don't know where is the terminal of the railways, the train of life is running on the paralle rails, at every station I enquire if it's the last station, the cold breeze forces me to close the windows, I come back to my cotravellers and continue playing the game of cards with them. I am happy I am not alone in my journey.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2018

Oh, If I could called out your name with clarity! ! Call my name and i will be there for you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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