Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Hope Is A Thing Of Inner Beauty Comments

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When I open my overcrowded closet
What do I see? But every stamped deposit
From a broken heart on one shelf
To a worn out mind, reminder of my old self
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 07 October 2015

Dear dear friend, this is really such an amazing poetic art. I love this. And after the struggles in words and images and mixed up feelings, you come to the conclusion of hope as an inner beauty to be honored by this kind of poetry which is a duty of every poet like you. Thank you so much! Continue leaking your pen to spread the ashes and the aroma of hope. I give you 10 for this!

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Leaking Pen 17 October 2015

Dear Elizabeth I am so sorry for my late reply, thanks for your heart felt comments, my life has been lately like a yo yo with its ups and downs and I try to find hope and beauty wherever I can to survive, and poetry has been my one outlet in doing so, I hope all is well with you and I really appreciate your feedback Truly Paul

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2015

To a warn out mind; but, with hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Leaking Pen 17 October 2015

my pleasure Truly Paul

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