Hope In My Heart Will Never Die.......... Comments

I loved the poem hope in my heart will never die

i like this ALOT! ! ^-^

this is a really good poem. i enjoyed it a lot. but i noticed that in your poems you tend to use a lot of puntuation. its kinda distracting, maybe you should tone it down a bit

you remind me of John Clare. you have your own style and own way of...punctuating it and spelling. obviously you don't care to follow many of the rules, which necessarily, isn't a bad thing. Unique. Keep up the poetry works.: ] everyone appreciates a good literary work.

Hope is always there.Pandora left in her box.There is a silver lining in every cloud and love conquors all bad things.Best wishes

actually it works better as a song

Ok, well i dont really follow the poem.... But all in all its not to bad..

good! ! ! don't let that hope leave. stay strong...im still praying for you.

not the best i have ever seen but not the worst either

wow that was interesting an emotional rollarcoaster i wont forget this poem

It was interesting, yes... but no. You use 'big horrible lie' too much, in the form of 'life'. And, it was just too much. Like, stop trying to make it all rhyme, it'd be MUCH better, than. Other than, it was quite good.

Pandora will be very proud of you. Very deep, meaningful poem. Paul.

lets never ever loose our hope....for a better world..your poeme is getting right into my heart...lovely

quit cool.nice page.

that was a great poem i could feel alot of emotion in it

that was a beautiful poem..thiz iz the 3rd poem ive read frm u and iz the best...its interesting......

and it shouldnt nice poem¨!

great poem i can really reflect on it

great wonders....nice poetics...

Lovely, I love these poems! please! write more! don't listen to Edwin Drood! He's full of CRAP! ! And if you like, read some of mine, I think you might like 'Invisible' the most, it's closer to the kind of poems you write. And some comments, tell your friends, PLEASE! !