Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Hope In Heaven's Day Comments

Rating: 4.9

Grief be mine, I ask you so,
If not for you, I wouldn't know,
How life once was and then be still,
How so precious, that death do steal.
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Arlene Dery
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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2021

Loveliest words from your concluding part. So very true! Please, dear Poetess, KEEP CREATING! Thank you.5 Stars full

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2021

There is God to give us hope. Grief will surely go away, On that glorious heaven's day. But while its here, there's just one thing, Pray our Lord, for peace he'll bring.

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Roseann Shawiak 08 April 2015

Grief has touched your heart and mind with such gentle, tender memories that when you pen your poems they awaken losses we have also shared in some small way. May you find your way through grief and feelings while writing them for all to read and see. Hopefully bringing some moments of peace into your life. This poem is very good, please keep writing, I will continue reading. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Arlene Dery 08 April 2015

Thank you so much. I appreciate your insight.

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Arjun Panday 10 April 2010

i have read this poem with full concentration and find's that this poem is full of emotional feelings perhaps due to loosing the loved one. very nice poem..

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Terence Nabbs 07 October 2009

I, ve just read your poem hope in heavens day beutiful writen with feeling emotioal perhaps due to losing a loved one

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Linda Stufflebeam 25 April 2009

my father past away 3 years now and he died of cancer. your poem remains of how much i miss him. i want to tell you i am 41 years of age and beginner at poetry. i really love you poem and put it my favorites. thank you and keep up the good poetry.

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Taylor Hardy 11 February 2009

this poem is great i love it

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Arlene Dery

Arlene Dery

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