Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Hope......(Hope Reigns Supreme) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hissing wind and the swishing sea
with a vengeance turns the wind to lee

Ragging sails, the ship is free
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Passionate Reader 13 October 2013

Brilliant work :) It's not only rhyming but the whole poem is flowing in a rhythm with a great message. The apt use of vocabulary is something that always enlighten your writings. An enjoyable read. Blessings :)

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Ruth Rayment 02 February 2011

This is a truly beautiful poem, the words are used in such a rhythmic way.: 0)

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 July 2009

I knew how hard it is to write in rhyme along with rhythm. Well its really a worth appreciate write.

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Luwi Habte 10 July 2009

wow, a great one this too hope is the main interesting thing we had even from the creator of us, u me and all of the created things... nice idea too bravo! ! ! Luwi

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Fiona Davidson 24 April 2009

Vivid piece...great ryhming....10+++

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