Thursday, December 3, 2015

Hope For Me? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Long, long this pain has been
With its relentless instruction
The imperfections are revealed
For its lessons are a soul torn
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Chinedu Dike 16 December 2015

Lovely depiction of lingering hardship and deplorable situations which many people face on daily bases, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. To envisage life without difficulties would definitely be an existential absurdity. Faith keeps those who keep the faith - Mother Teresa. When the going gets tough, the tough keeps going - Abraham Lincoln. Thanks for sharing fellow poet. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2015

Life and pain! Nice work.

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