Friday, June 27, 2014

Hope For A Good Day Comments

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Sitting at the edge of dry, hot desert
Waiting for the clouds' thunder alert
A pair of distressed eyes with hope
Slowly the dry wood he chops
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V P Mahur
hope sick
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2014

Very beautiful composition. Our day begins with hopes but by the end when all hope is lost, the heaviness is felt too hard. Beautiful way you have presented. I just loved the flow of words in rhymes...

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Akhtar Jawad 28 June 2014

A nice description of dejection and frustration.

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
V P Mahur
V P Mahur
Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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