Friday, January 3, 2014

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There is a whispering in the wind,
just short of telling a story-
a tragic tale of love and lost and what love was supposed to be- fairy tales
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Dorsey Dorsey
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Jamaa Mohammed 06 January 2014

To be honest found this poem realistic yes funny.. upto 4th line... Ending with fairy tales... But nothing funny about its depth..nice work!

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