Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Hope And Struggle Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bird with a twig on the beak,
Seen flown, toward the sun,

Some said, Ah! It's the fun,
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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2014

..........in the warm morning sun, a bird flying with a twig is beautiful imagery....loved the concept in this write....and the title is perfect....

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 August 2014

it is really a beautiful sight when the birds try to build their nests and these birds would pick up anything they found, even the plastic straws in the urban trees.. Good thought. Thank you Aflab for the poems and the comments..

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Gajanan Mishra 26 August 2014

wonderful image, I love it..

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