Saturday, August 16, 2014

Hope And Dope Comments

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Far lit a shimmering lamp; it is seen,
I am not alone, in the deep forest, I mean,
Under the sun, I moved, lonely, forlorn,
Moment ago, I was sleeping on the thorn,
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Heather Wilkins 17 August 2014

day means what is it both dark and bright life means what? many points made good write

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Salini Nair 17 August 2014

The thing which we can't see in bright light, Can be seen even a spark in the dark of night, ....very meaningful..........................nice...................

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