Friday, July 29, 2016

Hope Aglow Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The sultry day to its end creeps
The air is lulled, silence is deep
The sun sinks in clours dull n drab
The mundane, the trite's cuel grab
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Yasmin Khan
sorrow hopeless Firefly
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Nosheen Irfan 27 August 2016

What a beautiful piece! Lovely imagery to depict a sense of gloom, out of which emerges the glow of hope. A sure 10

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

A powerfully emotional and well written piece, Yasmeen. Thanks

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Yasmin Khan 30 July 2016

Thank you

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2016

Awesome imagery, wonderful picture well supported by fantastic poem...The last stanza took it to different level.. O my heart! Why ye in sorrow roll? Hark! Unlucky is a hopeless soul Who hath no believe in divine bliss Falls and down tumbles in an abyss

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Yasmin Khan 30 July 2016

Thank you M Asim Nehal

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Islamabad
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