Friday, August 10, 2018

Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

It flickers
- fragile
struggling for breath
deep in the shadows of my chest.
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Elizabeth Hefty
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Alvaro Cuesta 25 October 2020

" its light visible still to eyes who wish to see. Hope" Hope is only seen by those wish to do so! Great poem.

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James Mclain 28 September 2019

Hope can carry us through the darkest of times. Sometimes hope is all at times in life there really is. Great poem. James McLain

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Elizabeth H. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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We all live in hope... very good write!

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Bob khoury 10 August 2018

easy, clear, swift to the heart. So many emotions in a fast motion

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 August 2018

deep in the shadows of my chest. It flickers - wan and pale striving to melt the ice clutching at my heart.....we always live in hope. everyday, everyhour we learn to build up hope and live in it.. thank u for this poem full of good expressions. tony

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Elizabeth Hefty

Elizabeth Hefty

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