Thursday, December 3, 2015

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Scarce a leaf hung on the tree
That awhile ago was astir
From the chatter of mirthful birds
And the breathings of mellow breeze
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Nosheen Irfan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

Well narration is done in the confluence of autumn and spring. Chattering of mirthful birds, breathings of mellow breeze and the huddling of leaves of the trees bring great inspiration and glee. Beautifully painted poem shared nicely.

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 May 2016

Hi Nosheen, I liked the image the misty breath of autumn. Great. Enjoyed reading. Shall come back to read again.

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

seasons could reflect our lives I like spring

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Shakil Ahmed 03 December 2015

lovely poem with nice images, thanks for sharing

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Lahore, Pakistan
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