Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Hope Comments

Rating: 3.3

I stare out of my window
With the little faith left in me
I berate myself
For even thinking about you.
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Sharma Neha
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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2015

Hope is often an illusion and ifs are always counterproductive, yet we humans persist. Thanks for sharing, Sharma. Peace

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Chinedu Dike 09 June 2015

Love is a spiritual experience, it can be whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. Hope is a good breakfast but also a bad supper. A lovely piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 09 June 2015

It pays to hold on to hope, I liked the way you mirrowed what the heart feels

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