Wednesday, October 8, 2014

Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

She comes in the room through closed windows,
A flying fairy from eternal meadows,
From the milky way With crescent in eye brows.
An athlete of nature who very well knows.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2018

A wonderful poem. Yes, hope keeps us alive and gives us wings to fly The cruel world when looks like a I listen to this pleasing sound of the bell. Great lines from a marvelous poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 October 2014

like jonne donne be my love...in fact we live in the world of hope evil or good..this is the earth lovely

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

See my charms I am your hope, Hold my hands and get up from the slope.........beautiful hope poem

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Heather Wilkins 10 October 2014

in a fairy land all is possible in our world it would be impossible with out hope great

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

Hope never dies. hopes are the strength of life. Your poems are evolved from the soft corner of heart. Thank you so much Sir for sharing this beautiful write.

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Valsa George 08 October 2014

How I wish if that fairy had come to everyone in despair! Yes, hope comes in many guise and pulls us from the valley of dejection! It is her magic touch the world needs in times of despondency and depression! A great write as usual Akhtarji!

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Khalida Bano Ali 08 October 2014

A heart touching beauty the flying fairy is needed by all.

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Mark Heathcote 08 October 2014

This is lovely very musical I much enjoyed it.

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Neela Nath Das 08 October 2014

Wow, a lovely poem.If the fairies of Hope were not in Pandora's Box the world would have turned more painful.

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