Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Hope Comments

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The world is slowly breaking apart,
Broken to pieces, scattered,
Is my little heart,
I stoop down low to collect them,
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Shruti Goswami
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Kishore Kumar Das 08 April 2016

good observations about the present scenario...nicely explained..

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Rishabh Sethia 23 September 2015

Nice work Shruti.. :)

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Shruti Goswami 29 September 2013

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

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Queeny Gona 29 September 2013

Shruti ji I could see regrets in your lines for the present miss happening. Yet yr mama is right love conquers all. For a short while money seems to rule yet love cannot be earned through money!

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Dave Walker 21 August 2013

Hope is something we all need. A great poem.

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