Hope Comments

Heartfelt and beautiful poem of loss.

Heartfelt and a beautiful poem on loss

A beautiful sentiment was left at the end just like the last thing in the box.

The concluding line has given an extra sparkle to this memoirs of sad thoughts! ! A moving write! !

Oh! So lovely, David! A very touching poem to see one living in memories and hope! GREAT!

Wonderful and heartfelt. This poem is great, thank you Mr Wood

We are all born as blank DVD's just waiting to record a lifetime of memories... Your poem made me smile... Thank you...

Really beautiful, a wonderful poem. We all will have the box one day.

Memories of a lost loved one - always very sad. A poignant write.

Good memories are the seeds of our heart that always blooms with the sense of having love within our reach! Beautiful write!

This poem captures the thoughts of someone who has lost some very precious to him. Lovely

Hope is the ray which inspires us to fight all the oddities of life. Marvelous!

Ah yes all that was left in Pandora Box was hope and in the end its all we have our home and maybe our dreams. What a lovely sad poem about loss but so optimistic. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

though the poem has dark patches of past, the memories of past is a joy of present, powerful imagery 'shoe box' 'empty box' and finally the concluding line the protagonist of the poem Mr David wonderful writ to ease the pain of lost nice =1

a glow at the bottom of the box is the hope...a striking line..i love it, like it.....very nice...

A beautiful write, telling a life story full of emotion. How important these memories are. Thank You David

Very touching and sentimental write. Softly layered and you ended on a positive note.